Doubt?

I'd have to say I'm at a stopping point with this one for a few days
at least. The balance between capturing the immediacy of what I'm
doing and "finishing" it becomes a gutteral and seemingly
immeasureable thing. What I do not want to do is over work it and
produce a sense of under valueing the "fresh" aesthetics and leaving
the content to do all the work. It could (and may already) feel like
presenting dead facts vs. presenting the truth in love. The more I
look at this it feels lacking...